lust
no
struggle
no!
man cut, kill
soft, pink love
wither, weak
please stop
red
quiet, black secret
raw, dirty, bare
go away
death
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I wrote this on my friends' fridge with magnets, so I could only use certain words.
Written October 29th, 2006
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wow
very intriguing very inventive for the lack of letters you would have to use excellent write and here is proof I am not lazy
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It was anything but a simple, ordinary experience.
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Why apostrophe?
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How about "Crimson Epiphany"....
I put the perceived relevance in bold:
crim‧son /ˈkrɪmzən, -sən/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[krim-zuhn, -suhn] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation
–adjective 1. deep purplish-red.
2. sanguinary.
–noun 3. a crimson color, pigment, or dye.
–verb (used with object), verb (used without object) 4. to make or become crimson.
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[Origin: 1375–1425; late ME < ML cremesīnus ≪ Ar qirmizī (qirmiz kermes + -ī suffix of appurtenance) + L -īnus -ine1; see cramoisy]
e‧piph‧a‧ny /ɪˈpɪfəni/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[i-pif-uh-nee] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation
–noun, plural -nies. 1. (initial capital letter) a Christian festival, observed on January 6, commemorating the manifestation of Christ to the gentiles in the persons of the Magi; Twelfth-day.
2. an appearance or manifestation, esp. of a deity.
3. a sudden, intuitive perception of or insight into the reality or essential meaning of something, usually initiated by some simple, homely, or commonplace occurrence or experience.
4. a literary work or section of a work presenting, usually symbolically, such a moment of revelation and insight.
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[Origin: 1275–1325; ME epiphanie < LL epiphanīa < LGk epipháneia, Gk: apparition, equiv. to epi- epi- + phan- (s. of phaínein to appear) + -eia -y3]
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Black Secret might make a nice title...
I like how you wrote this with so few words and the words you chose conjure up a great poem. Nicely done. Even with magnets on a fridge.
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Fight for Freedome from Death.
oo that's clasic
how about.
Free to Shunn Death.
very nice free verse. nicely writen.
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human's apostrophy
well good write and kinda short but amazing
well keep it up
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the poet of hearts and beautiful words -
short but loud
Good write!!! Short read but loud words.....I like it!!!as for a title Raw Desires.... You did this write well using fridge magnets... there's never enough letters!!!
Tracey -
I would name it Raw. I think a one-word title is the most appropriate for this kind of poetic shoutout. Besides, you've used the word in the poem. If you don't like Raw, call it A Shoutout.
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intresting..i would name it "dark thought" or something...its very good and a great short read. thanks for sharing..but go along thoughts or a few devilish words
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