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You can't take that away

I look out the window
So gloomy and gray
The rain is falling
There is mud everywhere


You think I'd be sad
But there is a smile on my face
I'm in a great mood
You can't take that away


I have to move
TO a new site tomorrow
I really don't want to
But the cookie must crumble


My future is bright
Both in business and love
I'm in a great mood
You can't take that away

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I'm in a good Mood, What can I say.
Written October 29th, 2006

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  • Broken-Rickie
    October 29, 2006
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    Glad to see you in a good mood Dad...

  • June-bug
    October 29, 2006
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    *happy*

    Glad to see you smiling and in such a great mood. wanted to send you a smiling but didn't work
    Edited on Oct 29, 3:29 because ''.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 29, 2006
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    Rated G for Gladness!

    Who would want to take that away, anyway!? This is a great poem, and I rate it G for Gladness!!