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thanks for telling me

you never said you didn't
you never said you would
but you never stopped me

i suppose it was for the best
i suppose it was mature
but you were just along for the ride

i am sure that you still love me
i am sure that you still care
but i don't

my heart was broken on the front lawn
and i left it there
never to open or love

you may think its harsh but i call it
enough
i cant take the pain anymore
i WONT take it anymore

Goodbye Nathan



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even thouhg i name a name it involves more thatn one person/ time
Written October 28th, 2006

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  • atomikdaedriem
    April 24, 2007

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    c.c um I got that point quick! you sound like me honey!you'll find someone better there's always someone better.

  • zciindiiz
    January 29, 2007

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    Hopefully, you'll move on. Away from him. :/
    I can see your feelings in this poem. Good write. ^^

  • mysticangel508
    December 3, 2006

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    wow...this is an amazing poem..everything just..yeah its like...DAMN i cant even think of the freakin words! i love this poem bc yeah its awesome & ur awesome & we are all awesome with our cows.


  • AngelOf Destruction
    November 23, 2006
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    wow i love i

  • maverick13
    November 6, 2006
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    thanx i was really angry when i wrote that i just was so irritated. but you know what i haave moved on, and winter formal is coming up so i have ppl and places to be and i am not going to spend time being upset over something that apparently wasnt meant to be......... but i thought it was supposed to work and i thought he said he would give it a chance. but i guess not

  • Kay Laon Anders
    October 30, 2006
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    Great Write

    I want to cry.... Taton broke up with Brooke yesterday...just thought I would tell you...Great write Sis'!

    KAY

    Forever the Fart


  • sparkling-assassin
    October 28, 2006
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    This is really sad,
    ,
    great job,
    I love the poem,

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