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Betray Me

i cant do this anymore, i cant fucking physically do this
dont you see what he's done, cant you see what he's doing
sitting, watching, ive done it again, the only source, oncemore let free, waiting for the pain to come, but it doesnt, it wont, the mental pain overrules the physical pain ... everytime
i could never hurt myself as much as he has hurt me

your marriage, your marriage! your fucking marriage
what about your kids, do they really mean so little to you that you had to knowingly bring back the one person, the one person they fear the most ... the reason they have no dad ....... and you call me selfish.

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now i know were i stand
Written October 28th, 2006

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  • doesne1care
    January 18, 2008

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    anna this is so strong, u r so strong, yet its so nice to no the start of the end has begun! if u no wot i mean! i admire ur bravness and ur power 4 life! x x x

  • doesne1care
    January 18, 2008
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    huh i just lefe u a long comment n it ant showed up! grrr
    x x x

  • doesne1care
    January 18, 2008
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    omg


  • Veosoco
    October 31, 2006
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    Great

    awww babe

    this is a really powerful poem, you can totally feel all the hate n frustration jus tryin to burst out of this poem

    im always here for you babe ok

    <3 Greggles <3

    Edited on Oct 31, 11:23 because ''.