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"Richer Than Silver, Richer Than Gold"

"Richer Than Silver, Richer Than Gold"

A Love that is true
It never grows old
It's richer than silver
And richer than gold.

Enduring the hard times
Working them through
Yet savoring the memories
Even though misconstrued.

It's giving a light
Through nights dark and dense
Giving a reason when
Nothing makes sense.

Giving your strength
When mountains get steep
When weakened from exhaustion
When the body's too weak.

When eyes fogged with tears
They feel they must cry
Let them know
Your right by their side.

Lifting their spirits
When they seem to break down,
Let them know
You're always around.

It's showing them sunlight
When the sun does'nt shine
A promise you'll be there
Til the end of time.

A Love that is true
It never grows old
It's richer than silver
And richer than gold.


Copyright@2006
Sandy/San-d

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Option #8
"A Love That Is True Never Grows Old"
Written October 28th, 2006

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  • aceray
    July 22, 2007

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    Everyone should experience this! Everyone should have this! What a world this would truly be if everyone was this!

    rey


  • poe-boy
    April 7, 2007

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    i have something in my eye...

    yours was the first poem i read when i ventured back to allpoetry.com..
    quite a welcome back! i'm welled up...
    thanks for reminding me why we write and why we post here at allpoetry.com
    expect some new stuff from me soon!
    the gloves are off! i intend to have you well up as well.......(me english good speak) - poe-boy...
    - gonna head to your site now
    p.s. - mine is http://petercarroll.homestead.com
    p.s.s. change one word and you will have to answer to moi! - (i can be relentless)


  • me steve
    December 19, 2006

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    Speachless

    My My how beautiful the words are
    And such meaning in this piece.
    Lifting their spirits when they are down
    My skin has pins and needles.
    Excellently write thank you very much.

    I wish you all the very best for Christmas and NewYear.
    May the Good Lord Be with you.
    All MY best regards, steve


  • Frogzter gold member
    November 6, 2006
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    A lovely piece deep with meaning and loving thoughts. You did the quote justice and painted a wonderful picture in this delightful piece. It flows well and the rhyme is wonderful. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest.
    Frog ~


  • San-d
    October 28, 2006
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    Thank you so much for the comment. Good luck with your contest.....Hope you get many entries and good luck on the judging.......Smiles your way >> Sandy San-d


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 28, 2006
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    Beautiful words and well inspired from the quote. Amazing job with this. I love it.

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    Storm

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