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A Gorgeous Creature

Really,

Now what can I say?


I met a gorgeous creature the other day!


Hiding behind fear,

That much was clear,

It sat with a frown,

That would not be put upside down.


Saddened by time,

Thinking it was fine,

It did not know,

That to it love freely flowed.


Soon it will learn to fly,

If not,

Happiness will die.

Arise creature of beauty.


Indulge in your truthful duty.

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Written October 28th, 2006

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  • Nature Song silver member
    November 1, 2006
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    Interesting poem. To see beyond the confinments, ndulge in your truthful duty! Nice lines and imagery! ~Sie


  • StarrieNacht
    November 1, 2006
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    Hehe, I smile. This was totally a Dr.Seuss type of writing style. I loved it! At first I thought hmmm a bird, then ah maybe a sunrise and now I'm not sure, but I like it!
    Thanks for the little laugh I got this morning