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Blessings

The sun wakes heaven,
Flowers bloom, birds sing for you,
Your smiles gather dreams.

Friends arrive with love,
A princess in her birthday dress,
Hearts shower blessings.

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Written October 28th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • maa gold member
    October 29, 2006
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    dear rejitha,
    thank you so much again for participating in this contest. how original to use the haiku-form for your birthday-message. the essential is here beautifully expressed in few and simple words. what a graceful poem.
    all the best to you,

    maa


  • Titus gold member
    October 29, 2006
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    Now that had the cream topping of all compliments, with 'friends' being the prime topping for cream. Lovely poem!!!

  • Ankeeta silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    yup thanks again


  • maa gold member
    October 28, 2006
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    thank you for your entry, rejitha.