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It's only for today

I can sit here and tell you the reasons
But you woulddn't understand.
I can sit here and write you the reasons
but it just makes me sad.
I can sit here and draw you the reasons
but my drawing is really crappy.

So...
How can I tell you that we need to be alone for today.

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Written October 28th, 2006

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  • XxXAtreyuKingXxX
    December 11, 2006
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    i loves it

    )O(
    Tythan


  • ZaneArtemis
    October 30, 2006
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    Ah... Sorry. My first poem I could think of and it is bad...


  • visualimpulse
    October 28, 2006
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    The first four lines had me drawn in, but then I seen the word crappy, and I don't really understand the rest. I fdeel you had a go at being profound, but I think I might have missed the point. There is a small spelling mistake in woulddn't as well. Perhaps a few notes at the bottom of this write would explain it more to the reader???/