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Stay With Me

I asked you to stay,
But you turned around,
And walked away.
You left me alone,
To deal with the pain.
The pain was hard to endure.
But I never really endure the pain.
I let it take over.
It took over my weak, innocent soul.
When I asked you to stay,
You looked at me and laughed.
"Silly Girl, why would I stay with you?"
Your laugh was cold and heartless.
It felt like an ice icicle going through,
My weak vulnerable heart.
I asked you to stay one last time,
But the look in your eyes was enough.
I dropped to the floor crying,
As my soul was engulfed in pain.
My heart felt like it was ripped out.
But no matter what,
I still love you.

Author notes

I wrote this one day when I was really depressed for some odd reason.
Written October 28th, 2006

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  • Jay Elle
    October 28, 2006
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    It is a very emotional piece and very well written,
    Best wishes
    Jay