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Portrait Of A Dreamer ~

Missing image

She waits

stepping lightly
as breath beckons caress of kiss
in frail moments, searching


finding feathers floating
as softer seasons flower
Scent waltzes upon air, to mingle

in poetic symmetry, swaying

painting emotion in silent hue
as hidden stars mimic
the art of her blushing.


Once safe in love's eager embrace,
tickling the face of destiny
in teasing fashion of fancy,


reminiscent of rainy twilights
when spirits yearned for solace
where gardens stood weeping
for blossoms to bear.


Many sunsets passed  
in secret serenade
while enchanted eyes dreamt
of tender moments


now shared in serenity's song
as clouds cascade
daring to catch a glimpse


of love's perfect portrait


as she sighs~


Lynda

Author notes

option #1

"Scent waltzes upon air, to mingle"
Written October 28th, 2006

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  • poet2angels silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    awwwww, TY Bear....That is such a lovely compliment

    Lynda

    Now that I finally have a chance, I am going to read your poem


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 28, 2006
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    Congratulations on your silver in this contest
    Gaylene~ ~


  • Arkbear gold member
    October 28, 2006
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    Bear hugzz

    I can't believe this poem poem didn't win the Gold...This is one of the ~prettiest~ poems I have read lately...well done....Loved this ... I actually almost startin cryin at this point.. blush*

    Once safe in love's eager embrace,
    tickling the face of destiny
    in teasing fashion of fancy,

    And of course the rest of the poem........and then this ~~

    now shared in serenity's song
    as clouds cascade
    daring to catch a glimpse
    of love's perfect portrait

    Wow....a lovely poem for sure....good job......the Bear ~~

  • poet2angels silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    TY Sweet Sis

  • poet2angels silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    awwwww tY my dear twin! Your words are so special to me ;f
    Lynda♥

  • poet2angels silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    awwwwww, TY Timothy for your lovely comment and for your friendship!
    Lynda

  • poet2angels silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    ty
    Edited on Oct 28, 1:07 p.m. because ''.

  • FindingFate
    October 28, 2006
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    Time for scores...

    Title:9
    Metaphor:9
    Imagery:9
    Form:10
    Spelling:10
    Caps and punc:10
    Relateable:10
    Rules:10
    Background:10
    Different:8

    Total: 95/100


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    October 28, 2006
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    My gosh, but this is so wonderfully BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Sigh......
    Your heart shines forth just awesomely within every line of this piece, my friend! Trina will LOVE this!
    All the very best to you in the contest!

  • FindingFate
    October 28, 2006
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    You are a romantic visionary for sure. You pen perfection every time you pen of love my dear. This is breathtaking, beautiful and flows lovely. Best of luck...Trina

    In order to give you the part I liked best I would have to darn near copy and paste the whole thing!!! Great piece sis!!!


  • kaibab silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    This is a sacred piece perfect in every way...It just flows wonderfully in beauty and grace and of coursse, love you are really an angel aren't you...


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 28, 2006
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    A truly romantic piece of a lover's dream dance, with such a bright background that sets the mood, and puts the reader in a trance, a love at fisrt glance..Thanks for sharing you my friend, and all the best to you in this contest as well!

    -Timothy

  • poet2angels silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    awwww, My bro, thank you for your sweet comment. Your words mean so much
    Lynda

  • poet2angels silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    awwwwww, ty my dear friend! That is so sweet of you!
    Lynda


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    October 28, 2006
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    Excellent

    Lynda this is pure magic on a page worte from a caring loving heart with so much romantic vission. And oh what vissions of love you have penned here for us all to read. A truely beautiful poem indeed. Wishing you all the very best in this contest Sis love Brian.

  • afireinthisheart
    October 28, 2006
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    beautifully written

    that is so beautiful Lynda...love's perfect portrait is etched in the mind...not only of beauty, but also the beholder...awesome...good morning...smile...hugs and love, David

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