Itty bitty little car
I'm checking out how blue you are.
You look so cool in the light,
try to roll with all your might.
If I push you then you'll go,
Be careful not to hit a toe.
Nobody else seems to like my car,
they drive theirs but I push mine far.
Author notes
This is the very first poem I wrote on Allpoetry.com. I joined AP October 27, 2006.
My newest poem is "Love Finds You" written May 21, 2009.
Written October 27th, 2006
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Comments
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wait..I think I own this car NOW! Very cute...good luck!
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This is really cute. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Absolutely an outstanding poem! I love this blue car poem! I think everybody should have some toy cars! I have some, I really do!
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