The sun slips over the water out here by the Atlantic
Sitting up here shivering from the wind and you.
You're softly whispering out notes of our song.
Your voice and your gaze send thrills through me.
We stay on our blanket and watch the sun wake.
As it creeps out over the water you finish your song.
Leaning close, as the sun reaches us, I start to warm
Your arm pulls around me and I am content.
There is nothing better than this sunrise that we share
Whispering out music and I love you's into the morning air.
And as the sun begins to jump start the world we come together
Sharing the perfect kiss to begin our lives with.
Author notes
Written October 27th, 2006
A contest entry
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That was very romantic, I really liked it. You did very well with this. Unfortunately you didn't follow a rule....still like this poem, nice write
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very beautiful and romantic. I love the tenderness of this piece it was a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and best wishes to you
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Thanks for your entry. This is a good poem.
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