Mr. Perfect, Oh so perfect...
Perfect turned out to be perfectly wrong
Deceiving eyes, I used to love...
and a voice, so soothing to my ears
...your words manipulate me,
you've got me eating out the palm of your hands...
You're the toxin that's gotten under my skin
Slowly driving me crazy...
... breaking my heart...
You're killing me, with reassuring lies
Twisted mind, you love hurting me
You're a sexual predator in disguise
Hidden behind ever changing eyes
Wanting me, exclusively for yourself
... it's always about you
My mind never wanders far from you
Requiring full devotion
You don't want another coming too close...
... because too close means you might lose... me
Double standards, your a hypocrite at heart
I once thought your heart beated red
with love that flowed through your veins just for me
You said that you loved me
...that you would kill to have me...
...and die without me...
Yet here you are, memorized by another
Your thoughts are consumed by someone else
and inside your dreams I'm far from them
Exclusive devotion is a one sided act
I'm a slave for your love
While your thoughts are consumed by someone else
Who fills your heart with passion?
Who's the girl that thrills your mind
... puts the fuel to your fire
... kick starts your lust?
Because I know it's no longer me
... have I displeased you? bored you?
Or was I just used by you?
There's no longer enough to keep you all to myself
As thoughts of another flood your head
Perversion runs wild inside your veins like a galloping horse
The heart that once beated red for me
beats now for the passion of another
Inside your mind
You've cheated on me a hundred times
I only wish I had the key
to unlock all the secrets you keep from me
Because inside your heart
I know I'm not there
Inside this bed
between these sheets
innocence is lost, when it's not me...
Author notes
Something I wrote about a month ago... this is the first piece I've written in like half a year...
Written October 27th, 2006
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Beautiful..
I haven't read any of your work in a very long while but I see you've still got the touch.. It's too bad you haven't been writing much, I understand one could get busy or loose the feeling but true writers have it deep down in their souls..
Very very well done
Nour
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you need to write more... i miss your poems... even the ones (including angry)at me... very good poem
take care darlin
charlie -
This is one of the most impacting piece of literature that I've read in a long time... wow the words and feeling that you use to express yourself in this is unbeleivable! Great job!
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Long time since I’ve seen something new from you princess.
You’re still good; you always make me feel closer to your heart.
Hope to talk to you again sometime.
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Sad.
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wonderfully written
guys suck period i like it and am looking forward to reading more of your work
Jane -
The sentiment expressed here is so very powerful. To believe that you are the one and only in someone's life and then find out that there is someone else taking your place is so very painful. You expressed the hurt and the longing very well in a wonderful poetic form. Much luck to you in the future. The pain will receed eventually in the form of anger. Sometimes it's easier to embrace than the hurt.
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Wow.. thats really good. I can relate to it totally. Guys suck sometimes.
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