Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
I open my eyes
To a bright morning
Looking forward to meeting
Someone for whom I think, I知 falling
Head over heels.
What is this happening
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
I get up everyday smiling
I look myself into the mirror
I try to figure
Is it really me
Or I知 still dreaming!
My eyes are shining
Face is glowing
Heart is jumping
And all I知 thinking
If I知 dreaming
Oh God! May it be never ending!
What is this happening
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
I get my self together telling
I need to stop thinking
I should stop having
All the emotions racing
Through my mind, heart & soul
The more I知 trying
The more I知 falling
Head over heels
What am I doing?
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
Nothing seems to be working
All my efforts are going in vain
I seem to loosing control
Over my mind, heart & soul
It seems everything
Inside me, around me
Simply wanting
To go closer to him
All the time to see him
To feel him
To be next to him
What is it in him?
That keeps me wanting
To go over & over
Go closer & closer to him.
Why is he affecting me
In such a way
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
Have you ever felt everything
In jut one moment
When you are smiling
With tears flowing
Mind stops working
Heart starts controlling
You are sweating in cold
Stomach is churning
Because its exciting
To be around someone
To be with that one
Who all of a sudden
Gives you池e life
A very special meaning
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
My mind for the very first time
Along with my heart
Seems to be working
Towards the same thing
To accept he痴 the one
With whom I知 meant to be
No matter for how much time
I知 happy to be
Beside, with him
Even though it can be
Scary at times
But it痴 something
I feel is right
Because it feels right
What is it?
It痴 not what my friends are telling
It can稚 be the 4-letter word
From what I致e been hiding
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
What ever I知 feeling
It sure makes
My days brighter
My Nights shinier
Life happier
Then still why is I知 all that scared
Only If you could me
What is it really I知 feeling!
I'm afraid to say it out loud
But I think so too
It is love, the four letter word
Yes I am in love!
It feels weird
It makes me confused
But most of all
It makes me live
a fuller life
Beyond what I had ever imagined!
Author notes
Written October 27th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- There's Something About Love... by Lady-of-Twilight.
350 points, ended November 7, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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cool
I like the poem. Sounds great.
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So beautiful!
I am so amazed with this piece! So beautiful and so powerfully written....enjoyed reading this....keep up the great work! Smiles, Terry -
First of all I appologize for delayed reply, I didn't mean it. Now, Thanks a lot for your encouragement, it is much appreciated.
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quite lovely
I loved this! There was a progression, a growth of thought. It wasn't just some rambling babbling, it is more than that. It is more. It is quite lovely. The flow was a little off, but the idea and most of the diction was great. Thanks for submitting!
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