You are my medication.
My pain is just a side-effect.
I swear I can handle it.
I swear I’m of sound mind.
I can prove it.
I’ll vow not to cry.
I’ll vow not to die.
I’ll vow to hold it all inside.
These tears are not real.
These aches are just my imagination.
Just don’t push me aside.
Don’t make me second best.
Don’t make me like all the rest.
Just treat me right.
Prove to me your words are true.
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was about Derek...now not so sure...but it's nice :-)
Written October 26th, 2006
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WOW
...I WILL SAY MORE, SWEETIE...BUT FOR NOW.......WOW!
wml...................Lionslove
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This is definitely an awesome poem...not sure what to say about it, because it begins beautifully and perfectly and ends pretty much the same way.
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You are my medication.
My pain is just a side-effect.
This is so awsome, love is a drug and sometimes the side-effects are to much for the soul to bare.
I’ll vow to hold it all inside.
You are not alone . I lost count of how many times i have made those promises to myself not to cry, to hold all emotion inside not realizing it was eats you alive.
Just treat me right.
Prove to me your words are true.
This is beautiful, so emotional almost begging for love.
I think this is an awsome write, it has nice rhythm and is easy to read and relate to. Keep it up.
I am eager to read more of your work
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This is nice poem, I like the last 2 lines of words, they have to prove true for any true love. Nice write. I'm looking forward to reading more! -
its nice
keep it up, keep writin them awesome poems
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This is a very sincere dive into the heart and where it can take you. Love is like a drug - isn't it? Nice piece! Best wishes!
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awsome poem. keep up the good work.
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hum???????
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