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Think About It

We live on this big round ball

And we never stopped to think about it.


What we do to her everyday

And we never stopped to think about it.


We use Atomic Bombs and Nuclear bombs

And we never stopped to think about it.


We pollute her atmosphere and oceans

And we never stopped to think about it.


We wage endless wars on her damaged lands

And we never stopped to think about it.


Now this round ball has turn to tide

And we never stopped to think about it.


She raised tidal waves and earthquakes

And we never stopped to think about it.


She sent hurricanes and tornadoes

And we never stopped to think about it.


She sent raging fires and flood waters

And we stopped to think about it.


Now what do you think will happen next

Think about it.




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Written October 26th, 2006

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  • freespirit51
    November 13, 2006
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    Thanks draco I am so glad you enjoyed it. It was an exercise in a new style I was trying out.


  • foofina
    November 4, 2006
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    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • freespirit51
    November 4, 2006
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    Thanks lingonberries I am so glad you enjoyed this write. It was a difficult write trying to put the right feeling into the words.


  • lingonberries
    November 4, 2006
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    This is good! It will make people think, and that is what we have to do!


  • freespirit51
    October 30, 2006
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    Thanks for your kind words as always. Yes it is true but by the time something is done I fear it will be to late. The goavernment in Europe are already admitting to global warming but noting so far had been done.

  • Mother Angst
    October 29, 2006
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    your poem did indeed get me to thinking...scary stuff happens when we dont take care of what we have been given by God.
    well written poem. i enjoyed it very much.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 29, 2006
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    WONDERFUL WRITING

    BRILLIANT, JUST A GREAT PIECE OF WRITING HERE. THIS IS SO TRUE TOO. THIS IS THE ONLY HOME WE HAVE GOT. IF THIS GOES, THEN SO DO WE. WONDERFUL WRITING.

  • freespirit51
    October 28, 2006
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    Thanks ToHeart glad to see it touched you.


  • freespirit51
    October 28, 2006
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    Thanks tender wolf I am glad it touchd you. Mother Nature will get her revenge on us a little at a time just like we did her.


  • freespirit51
    October 28, 2006
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    Thanks as always LisaMarie I am glad my words moved you. I don't think there will be much left for our grandchildren when they get older. Mother nature is already seeking out her revenge.


  • freespirit51
    October 28, 2006
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    Thanks Kaialise for your kind words. I am glad to see you have returned to the fold and have started to read my writes again. I think mother nature will be getting some revenge this winter.


  • freespirit51
    October 28, 2006
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    Thanks SEA angel. You kind words a re greatly appreciated. I agree with you and I think we are in for another terrible winter here in the north. I can see signs of it everywhere.


  • freespirit51
    October 28, 2006
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    Thanks sbabopj but I think she is already starting to take out her revenge on us. The weather has really changed alot over the past few years. Longer winters and shorter summers. I think it is going to be a horid winter this year as well.


  • To Heart
    October 27, 2006
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    Wow... so true...


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 27, 2006
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    thoughtful of the earth

    this is your best yet to me eople go about their everyday lives as tho it means nothing to them.the earth is our home all of ours home those that destroy dont care about us are our childrens future.its heart breaking buy what can we do but puy it in a poem.THANK YOU!


  • Sacred Ground
    October 27, 2006
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    This poem is thought provoking and well in line. You're right, we never do stop and think about it, and we all take things for granted so easily. It's evem worse for our children... We should think about that, huh? Great job. I very much enjoy reading you.
    LisaMarie
    Edited on Oct 27, 8:45 because 'typo'.


  • Gone2007
    October 27, 2006
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    This poem really makes you think..i get the ides that that was the point..lol you achived it with ease. This is a great write and deep.


  • SEA angel gold member
    October 26, 2006
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    Powerfully good

    Oh WOW! What a powerfully strong ending. I think about it A LOT and this is VERY sad to me. Insanity is when a person is a danger to others or self. Most peoples behavior is a danger to self and earth and IS CRAZY and thoughtless and destroying earth.
    Edited on Oct 26, 11:14 p.m. because ''.

  • sbabopj
    October 26, 2006
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    True enough many of us don't think about it and the ones who do, can't do anything. It will be to late before we realize we have gone to far. The world needs a voice like yours to stand up and speak for her.


  • freespirit51
    October 26, 2006
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    Thanks Grannyeri for your comment and yes It think it is time befor we run out of time.


  • grannyeri gold member
    October 26, 2006
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    Lovely presentation on this page - background, picture and poem. It is time we thought about it, isn't it?

  • freespirit51
    October 26, 2006
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    Thaks as always Kari I am so glad to see your keeping a motherly eye on me.


  • Kari gold member
    October 26, 2006
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    deep

    I guess time will reveal about what is going to be happening next. This is a very thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

    Kari

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