Twin pools of blue Vast as the ocean
How I long to sink Beneath your depths
My heart pounds Out the thunder
My breath escapes in gasps
No man or angel has ever uttered such beauty
"I love you" purist magic from your lips
Your kiss a trail by fire
I burn an ember in your grasp
You've captured my
Heart my precious
When I had
Thought it lost
You've saved me
My angel
When my life
Twisted in the dark
Your a beacon
My beauty
That guided me
To your arms
Your my life
My dearest
My Every moment
Every breath
My every second of
Every day
Author notes
For the love of my life Chris All is Far in Love and War
Written October 26th, 2006 ~*~*~darkesthour~*~*~*~
A contest entry
- Anything Goes. by BurnBrandMemory.
350 points, ended November 20, 2006, 78 entries
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525 points, ended December 18, 2007, 44 entries
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"Twin pools of blue Vast as the ocean
How I long to sink Beneath your depths"
i love this metaphor! you used great imagery in this. anyway, great job and best of luck in this contest!
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I loved your poem
U entered my 1st contest ever and so I go back and read your poems every once and awhile. I loved your poem!!!
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so who's this lucky bastard. You could have had the real deal right here I hope he's worth it!
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lol yeah he loved it
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Excellent
This was very moving. I hope Chris appreciates it. -
aww how sweet! and quite odd at the same time. why odd? my boyfriend's name is Chris as well. nicely written! toodles.
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