I miss you so much my beautiful love
I miss you like I would miss my soul were I a monster
Just realizing I was brought about
Came alive with a whisper instead of a shout
By mismatched odds and bits and bobs
By parts is parts sewn without heart
Touched by a fire
Electric wire.
I miss you so much my darling boy
Gorgeous perfect man, formed for my dreamy pleasure
Every answer to every dark uttered prayer
My whispered desire echoed into the air
Every unchaste thought scalding hot
Every pure emotion breaching the ocean
Washed with desire
Perfect attire.
Your voice fills my dreams my glistening lover
Seductive and rich, rolling like English hills
Echoes off the castle walls in my mind's eye
Like layers of honey 'neath a cloud of butterflies
Shakes my soul in a baptismal bowl
Sings a rich song loud and long
Musical mystic
Purely hedonistic.
Author notes
Love lasts even if the lovers are gone.
Written October 26th, 2006
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darkavenger, there is no one else as wonderful as my love!! Thanks for reading and the comment! Hae a great day!
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i loved the descriptions of your man, i wish mine was like yours! keep it up, i loved it!
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If you saw his true beauty, inside and out you would know why I feel as I do. He is gorgeous, sexy, smart, kind, sweet, romantic, hardworking, old-fashioned, did I mention perfect? And no longer mine, but that is not part of his description as his name is on my heart. Thanks for reading.
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Yes.... deffinatly a poem about love. This is a good one! I love how you painted such a wonderful picture of your man. You can acutally see him. Enough to make some women jealous! Great work Keep it up! Thanks for promoting hopefully soon it will be on the front page for more people to click!
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dustookie thank you so much for readiing and for the supportive comment. I agree wholeheartedly and brokenheartedly. true love never fails and never ends. Thanks again.
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Dolphin, thank you so much for the kind comment. Yes, it can get pretty warm at times lol. Not lately unfortunately. Thanks for reading.
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This is a powerful piee to find your true love in life is a goal perhaps that we all try to attain yet no always successful but when that love is found it wills tay in the heart forever. The good and the bad even a dark love once the fire is burning... great flow and brilliant imagery full of descriptive emotions. A pleasure to read thank you brilliantly penned.
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Wow, it's getting warm in here. Nice piece, very sensual with a hint of darkness.
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Amanda, thank you so much for the kind comments! Glad you enjoyed and identified with the piece. -dfd.
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This was fantastic. You have written a wonderful piece. I can honestly relate to it too so that's a plus. There wasn't any rhyming however you made the piece flow beautifully. The word choice was amazing and ... you just comepletly made a wonderful poem here. Great job.
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Thank you Individiuality for reading and the kind understanding comment. Have a blessed day. -dfd
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aye love is forever, good and bad. it reamins in hearts and minds. a good piece here. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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Lady Wolf thank you for reading and for the comment. It is not possible to create a more beautiful boy than my former love even with Frankenstein's technology.
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This was a very beautiful piece with some very unique imagery. I liked the flow of this as well and the emotion. Well done!
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