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~halloween~

On Halloween night there's goblins and ghouls
there's even ghosts, but no fairies you fools
toad-faced witches flying on brooms
and handsome warlocks hiding in the gloom
so lock your doors on Halloween night
and be prepared for a fright!

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Written October 26th, 2006

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  • Hopelessly Hopeful
    January 25, 2007
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    I liked this it was kinda funny. Halloween is everyday for me.

  • gypsyfish
    October 27, 2006
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    funny/god write

    hey confusion, I LOVE HALLOWEEN!!! it is the only time of the year i can truly be myself. LOL. and i DO like a handsome warlock... and by the way, only faries wear boots. lol (again) good write... love GYPSYfish

  • blubber
    October 26, 2006
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    crappy

    I didn't like it, it might have been slightly better without the crappy childlish rhyming.


    • confusionismylife
      February 13, 2007
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      it was an english assignment

      i wrote this as a journal assignment for english class. it made my teacher laugh and i got a good grade so i put it on here to make other people laugh and so far you are the only one who left a negative comment.


  • Winter-Raven
    October 26, 2006
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    ok

    Aww cute. not much I can say... Do you like halloween? Seems you don't.. Oh well its a fun night.Easy rhyming scheme, And actually amusing.. nice

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