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Bridal Shower

The day is coming
When you will be
With the one
You want to be with
The only one
You are in love with
The magic is in the air
Love is budding in every corner
Love birds are singing
Violins are playing
Feel the heart beating
Butterflies are fluttering
You are little nervous
But, a lot more happier
Tons of gifts surround you
Friends come together with you
To create this moment
On your bridal shower
That you will cherish
Close to your heart
Not just for now, but forever.

The biggest day of your life
Will soon be knocking at your door
The day you have been waiting for
Your hearts beating even faster
Family and friends will come together
To create yet another
A very blessed moment of your life
Where you will tie the knot with one another
That will make your relationship even stronger
Because, with God’s blessing
You will enter
Into the holy matrimony
To hold and to cherish each other
Not just for now, but for ever
And, the word is “forever” to remember.

Soon the biggest day of your life
Will be a past history
Only to create new memories
With new family members
Added into your family.
The day might end
But the life is far from over
Because where it ends
There a new beginning
Keeping the circle of life
Alive and never ending.
This time you are together
With each other, for each other
To write new pages in the making of new history
That will last your generations
Not just for now, but forever.

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Written August 29th, 2006

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  • Kristin Melissa
    December 13, 2006

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    WOW

    Wow, this is an awsome poem!! After reading this I wish 2008 would get here even fast than I had before which I hadn't thought possible. Great Write!!!


  • imperfectperfection
    November 7, 2006
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    First of all I'm really sorry for such delayed reply, I really didn't mean to. Now, Thanks a lot again, a compliment coming from the poet, I respect and learn a lot, it means more than I can express in words. Once again, thanks for your encouragement.


  • individuality gold member
    October 28, 2006
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    You are little nervous - maybe inserting a so it reads - a little nervous?
    holy matrimony - made me think of batman and robin
    a good smiling poem here. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...

  • imperfectperfection
    October 26, 2006
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    I hope you find that someone special whom you will spend rest of your life & if you already have then may you never be apart :-)


  • Holyrevolution15
    October 26, 2006
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    Wow..this is really good...and true...one day we all shall have our very own love..who we will spend forever with. Keep up the good work.

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