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Striving To Be A Christian

Striving to be a christian,
is what I seek?
Day by day,
week by week.

Striving to be a christian,
is a work in progress?
I must continue on my journey;
to reach ultimate success.

Striving to be a christian,
is oftentimes, hard indeed.
But with God on my side,
surely I will succeed.

Striving to be a christian,
is my life's goal.
Because, now Jesus Christ lives in me,
deep down in my soul.

I must trust in the Lord,
with all my soul, my mind, and my heart.
And continue Striving To Be A Christian.
And from Him, my Lord, never, ever, depart.

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Tell me what do you think about striving to be a christian?
Written October 26th, 2006

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  • suzzieque53
    October 27, 2006
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    excellent

    This is a great poem. I struggle with this everyday. Keep up the good work. And like you say let God continue speak through you.
    Edited on Oct 27, 9:31 because 'typo'.

  • evilemochild
    October 26, 2006
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    i really like this part
    "Striving to be a christian,
    is oftentimes, hard indeed.
    But with God on my side,
    surely I will succeed."
    this is how i feel.. i liked your poem good write and goodluck