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"You'll Never Be Alone"

"You'll Never Be Alone"

I could float on the clouds
When in your eyes
Fly with the blue birds
Across the skies
Get lost in the mid
Of the misty blue
Envision your smile
That belongs to you.

See the sun sparkle
Upon the oceans tide
See the warmth
That you hold deep inside
See the stars
In your eyes as they glow
And laugh in the happiness
That your eyes bestow

They say that the path
To ones soul is their eyes
And if we search deep
They can tell us no lies
I followed that path
That led to your soul
And I left with a sense
You'll never be alone…..

Sandy/San-d













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Option #3
Are the eyes Blazing white wolf?
Written October 26th, 2006

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  • Analai
    January 27, 2007
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    cute poem.

    Nice job, I really liked the ending.


  • Celticmoon
    November 11, 2006
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    Well I do believe you have captured one of the many messages of his very heart and soul. I do believe he will enjoy this piece and how well you were able to read his eyes. Good luck and thanks for entering!


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    October 26, 2006
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    You've definitely captured one of his many messages in this poem. Wonderful job here as well, and best of luck in the contest. I enjoyed reading your entry.