Resurrect me with desire,
Intoxicate me in your lust.
Drive deeper with each breath,
Enraptured in your thunderous thrust.
Tease me, please me, make me yours,
Hear my ecstasy bellow through the skies.
Entice me with your pleasure,
Leave me breathless in gasping sighs. Tonight,
I fall at your command, from the heavens to the ground.
Gyrations of passion got me spinning round and round.
Hot, feel the flow as each sparking flame ignites.
Thighs collide to create a deluge of delights.
Nerves ablaze, each sensation growing stronger,
Invoking torrid heat, moaning deeper, longer.
Near the edge, to draw, our crescendo heightening,
Grab hold baby, come and ride the lightning!
Author notes
Song title per Metallica
Written October 25th, 2006
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Thanks hun, appreciate your comment.
Storm -
very well done babe
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Thank you hun for the comment, much appreciated.
Storm -
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
Your prose pitter patters
thundrous passion raining apart
kisses falling into splatters
exposing our throbbing hearts.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari -
LOL, thanks for the comments Ron, appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you John, appreciate the comments hun.
Storm -
And hear the tunder CLAP! wait, no clap here! LOL
nice write very enjoyable read thanks for sharing.
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great
Great poem, well written with such form and rthym, it takes the reader along for the ride on the lighting, one could almost feel the heat and see the llighting, great job, John -
Thanks love, appreciate the comment, and the encouragement. More storms...on the way.
Storm -
Awesome
Let it storm, let it storm, let it storm! Unlease your fury like the Goddess you are. I do believe your temporary block is flowing freely now. I have always enjoyed your writes, but these last two or three are too sweet. Keep them coming, "pun intended" as I'm am fond of stormy weather and the goddess that makes it happen! -
Thank you Sandy, most appreciated.
Storm -
A most excellent sharing, Storm; truly LOVED this!
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