Make love to me tonight
until the morning sun rises
Turn the lights down low
light some candles
Hold me close
Lets make love
the whole night long
clinging to one another in ecstasy
interlacing two souls
Falling together in a cascade of affection
A graceful descent upon satin sheets
where sweet memories are made
an existence only lovers understand
All uncertainties abandoned
here in each others arms
Giving all that we are
melting together as one
In this bed of longing
sheltered from the world
Tasting every part of each other
Filling each other completely
Together we'll sail into the heavens
with unbridled passion
releasing this sexual aching
that's held us way to long
Tonight is our night my love
The one we have waited on forever
turn the lights down low
light some candles
Hold me close
Lets make love
Author notes
Written October 25th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Romance, Roses and all kind of other beauty by Entwining Beauty.
300 points, ended February 17, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Beautifully sensual and moving!
Wow this is very tender and beautifully written, as well as delicately seductive and warming.
Love the poetic graphics and scultping and the page design too, you have put a lot of effort into this and it shows.
This is poetic perfection with lovely sentiments and essence, and an exquisite ambiance too.
Love it, well done, write on!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Thank you so very much.
Dusty
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Wonderful writing
Well, first of all, this is wonderful writing. The flow and the deep emotion of the piece, just shines through. Very very deep emotions indeed. The imagery is superb as well. Your writing is fantastic. Keep writing. You got a real talent.
Wayne
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Awww, thanks I'd say you got the talent, but thank you so much..
Dusty
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very nicely written
You have done a nice job with this sensual piece congrats on your win.....Michael
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Thanks
I appreciate that Michael...
and congrats on silver...
Love....Dusty
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oh this is just beautiful thank you for entering
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Thank you so very very much...I so appreciate the nice comment and feedback..
Dusty
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reading about all the love being shared here makes me want to find someone of my own. Thanks Dusty for warming my heart
the Satyr
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Dusty,
Quite a sensual piece here. Candle-light always good for the ol' romantic seduction. Beautifully composed my friend.
Keep the ink flowing Dusty, you are talented my friend.
Jeffro
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Thank you
I appreciate you taking the time to read and for the nice comment..Take care..Dusty
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Wonderful
This was delightfully beautiful and sensual. I love the visual of two souls interlacing. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you
I thank you so very much for taking time to read, and for the nice comment..
Take care
Dusty
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Well thank you Mr. romantic..I mean James...LOL...I appreciate you stopping by to read...
much love
Dusty -
wow absolutely amazing my friend I am lost for words with this piece just outstanding.
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Thank you Bill..
For your always wonderful comments..I don't know what I'd do without you...You are my very special and dear friend..
love ya more and more
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Thank you John...
I need to start writting again soon..just Have'nt been into it here the last few days...but I'll get it back..love ya bunches
You're a great brother
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very warm and preciopus poem sis, lot of warmth that goes in to that poem.
good luck in the contest sis.
much love
your brother john
please check out my poem kisses for you. -
4 STARS
Another winner Dusty. Sensuous but done with so much dignity. There are few who can compare with you on this type of a write. It makes one feel all the emotions of love making and still is done so gently. I give you 4 stars for this one. It makes good reading all the way from top to bottom. You did a wonderful job in this contest and if this does not win I'll be surprised. I wish you all of the best and all my love with oodles of hugs.
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Thank you so very much fallower... I appreciate it
Dusty -
i'minawe.
Sweetly romantic! Or should I say, "sweat(ly) romantic! It's getting a little hot in here. -
Thank you Jen...
This comming from you, means alot.. You certainly know how to write, and express yourself through stories and poetry.. so thank you..It means all the more from you.. I wish you all the best in this contest and any future contest that you may have.
love ya much
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Thank you Joe,
I have to agree with you.. Thanks ever so much for comming to read this again..I'm glad you liked..
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Dusty, I had to come back for another read. It's such an amazing experience when two partners can go at it all nite long and keep it alive far after the sun has risen
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Thank you,
eyes of an angel... I appreciate that ever so much..
Take care
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I love it what a lovely poem
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thanks so much..I appreciate it..
Take care
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The flow of this was wonderful along with the sensual side of desire. Great write!
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Awwww.. well thanks.. Glad you liked it..
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nice and sweet, the way it really should be Joe
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Thanks so much John,
Your sister surely appreciates it, and loves ya for it!!!
Glad you liked it
love ya much
your sister
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Wery wonderful and special poem sis, when you do make love it is so special between two people, when you are together with candle and passion between two people.
very nice sis
good luck in the contest
love you sis
your brother
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Thank you sis.. I very much appreciate it... Your comments always mean alot to me.
love ya
Dusty
sista
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very sensual sis making love is one of the most specil and tender feeling one can have...brill poem you did a wonderful job with it good luck in the contest
smiles ~your cheeky sis~
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Thanks so very much Dee..I appreciate you..
I have one more to write here in the next few days, then I'm gonna take a break..LOL.. at least for a week or so..
Hope all is well with you
love ya much
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Flameable
Dusty; Another good one. senual,passion,and real tender love.
DEE
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Thank you Bill I always appreciate your comments, and take them to heart.... I'm always looking to you for approval.. so thank you it means alot to me..
love ya bunches
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Dear Dusty, Another very good one. This makes love sound the way it should be. Tender and sweet. A love poem that stirs the soul. Great write and good luck in contest.
goody-Bill -
Glad you liked!!
"steamy passion is in fashion" LOL.. I like that..
I'm gonna write another one here in a few days..so you come back and see me sometime big boy
well when I get it finished..lol..
Thanks johnnyD...I appreciate it.
Love
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Steamy passion is in fashion
Damn! Where is the nearest airport!
THAT was damn good! tooooooooo gooooooddddddddddd!!!
Cold shower time, catch you later
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Thanks Shannon!!! I appreciate it.. I don't think this is really what she was looking for, but she needs some entries into this contest, and this is what I had.. Thanks again so so much.
and much love from me to you
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Sensual and romantic!
OK Miss Harlequin
This is a very sensual piece, love should feel like this when you are making love to the one that holds your heart!! Simply beautifully written and once again best wishes in the contest you are in!!
Shannon
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