You've asked me at times before,
"how much is it, I love you".
You are my jewel and more.
I'd give so much if I could,
with how much I love you-
~@*@*@*@*@*@*@*~
For if the world was mine,
it would be handed to you
to take any way you see fit,
transform, using your dreams
of how you wished it to be,
peaceful, beautiful and happy
with how much I love you-
~@*@*@*@*@*@*@*~
If I could just reach out,
take hold of one star from
the cool and darkened sky,
bringing the brightest for you,
only the best one would do,
so you will keep it near,
and you could clearly
recall, then you'd know;
with how much I love you-
~@*@*@*@*@*@*@*~
The moon is a symbol of
sweet bliss, a quiet night.
If I could, I would paint
our names together there with
words to show this world below-
I am yours and you are mine;
and as we'd look above, it
would remind you of my love;
with how much I love you-
~@*@*@*@*@*@*@*~
If a new world was out there,
somewhere, we could travel to
and your desire is to be alone,
totally with me, two being happy,
forever till we've reached heaven,
just you and I, together living,
re-capturing, moments lost before,
until, our time is of no more;
One thing you will know for sure-
with how much I love you-
~@*@*@*@*@*@*@*~
Darling, I offer you great things,
to manifest all of your dreams,
I can't give you any of the stars,
I am not able to fly to the moon,
I don't know of any new worlds, yet
with how much I love you-
~@*@*@*@*@*@*@*~
I do have something more dear to me,
that I have kept locked under a key
and to you, I'll give it so freely-
I give you me, my being, every part;
in touching your soul, I'll share all-
my mind, my body and my heart;
This is how much I love you.
***** Poetic Fanatic *****
Thomas F. Crumpler © 2,002 Jan. 19th/ Revised © 2006
Author notes
Revised For The One I love even more now. Thank You for Your Review!
Written October 25th, 2006
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In Total Awe
I am in total Awe with this piece... my favorite stanza is : If I could just reach out,
take hold of one star from
the cool and darkened sky,
bringing the brightest for you,
only the best one would do,
so you will keep it near,
and you could clearly
recall, then you'd know;
with how much I love you-
Yvonne
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Dear Tommy,
This poem is so dang good and sweet. I just read it over and over. It makes me happy.
Love,
Sarina -
Dear Tommy,
This is wonderfully written from your loving heart, no woman could resist these word written for the one you love.
I know your sweetie will be thrilled to receive it.
Love and hugs.
Joan
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Nicly done!
You write from the heart and give the poem life with the words you have so skillfully crafted upon this page...keep writing, and share your talents with the world...
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Lovely!
Wow!
This has to be one of the best love poems I've read from you my dear brother, and you know how much I love all your works, so, believe me, that's saying something...Not to mention one of the best love poems ever. I say this because I can feel within each line your sincere heart, and this lyrical poetic piece has much soul as well. You really outdid yourself here, and this was worth the wait! 
I know you've been busy, but this made up for your time away!!! 
Thanks for remembering your friends and fans with this lovely write, and I truly mean it when I say, this moved me, and your honey I bet loved it, if not, she should have, and shame on her. lol..
But I know she did. Thanks for sharing this masterpiece of poetic love, and you please keep coming back and post more when you can, you're awesome, and I'm not just saying that to make ya happy, though I might, I'm not, OK, Alright, we have that straightened out, lol..I think..lol.. I love ya bro, and I'm very proud and blessed to call you friend! 
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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