On the most silent of nights I can hear,
soft whispers echo of someone so dear.
Moonlight rhapsody playing soft and low,
so enchanting as the cool breezes blow.
Sequestered thoughts, knowny to me,
beautiful, secluded, felt so tenderly.
Enticing my emotions, enough to tease,
stirring emotions how youalways please.
I can almost feel, the sweetest of lips,
passion felt deep beneath fingertips.
Still breathtaking, our imagination,
savoring the thrills and sensations.
Shooting stars streak through the night,
my wish upon them, to hold you tight.
To feel your breath, melting our hearts,
stirring emotions, my longing starts.
Part of my heart you will always be,
there with you love across the sea.
No other love can compare to you,
I shall always be in love with you.
Till that day when I come to you,
I send a love so warm and true.
Your words of love from your heart,
Lets me ho;ld you close while apart.
Author notes
alie is the coolest
No matter when you look, you shall always be there, deep in my heart my friend.
Written October 25th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Tell me you love him/her, Tell me you hate him/her by otepsaint.
300 points, ended October 26, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I Loved your Love Story here! The emotions are very triumphant. Your poems are some of the Best I've read!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
Beautiful, It is nice to see an alie is the coolest around here lol, well this is a wonderful poem. good luck in the contes
Alie aka Otepsaint -
LOVELY COMMENT !!!!!!!
It is always a pleasure to read your comment. Hugs to you. Take care, Sandy -
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Thank you Kevin. You always bring a smile. Lov, Sandy
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Thank you for the wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy
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WOW!! This is breathtaking. So poetically written and the flow was so elegant. I love it, amazing!!
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SO VERY TOUCHING AND TENDER
Soooooooooo touching!
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Thank you Trxie for the wonderful comment. You take care now and have a wonderful day, Sandy
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Thank you Rudy, You always leave such lovely comments. Thank you
. They do make me smile. I write what I think and feel in my heart. Take care now!! Sandy
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Thank you for the lovely comment. so nice to hear from you. this one is dear to my heart. You take care, Sandy 
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Sooo very beautiful, Sandy! Very much enjoyed reading this one! All the best in the contest!
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another passion filled piece of picture painting,whoever said a picture worth a thousand words has not encountered your words.very well done,rudolf
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Excellent!!!
OMG this is sooo good!!! This is something that needs to be published! And it has 2 lives it can be about a lost love or a love happening right now. I love it!!! -
Simply Beautiful
Your words are like a volcano erupting the emotion's burning lava.
every flowery word of yours is charged with the heartfelt sensations. Nice use of natural phenomena in portraying a vivid picture of love. I really enjoyed your piece. Thanks for sharing.
I would appreciate if you read my poems and honor me with your critical comments.
Farshid Rezaee -
Yes, I can relate to this poem quite well. It's like you took the emotions from my very heart and put them on page. It was gorgeous.
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Wonderful
Very sensual with out usual sexual terms. Very deep from the pits of ones soul.
Vey well done. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece.
Rose
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