see me sitting in an empty space
alone, no one for miles
lost to the world with out a trace
not a soul has known of my trials
i left everyone with ease and grace
no one misses me all this while
no need evermore to look at my own face
all my sores and remorse in my heart compiles
things seem so much easier with out me in the world
laughter and love show bright in once sad lives
slowly the truth begins to become unfurled
and now for that light i do strive
my thoughts spin and become whirled
whirling together my burning memories take a dive
twirling together my heart is hurled
my love and happiness is no longer alive
in the distance i hear a bell
i remember the bell from a death before
descending to hell
confusion is upsetting, for i am unsure of whats in store
Author notes
*This sux!*
Written October 25th, 2006
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hmm
i think i'm the worst critic on my self but this is all dark and stuff of coarse.. hmm i dont even think i know where i'm going with this but i think what im trying to say is that its wishy washy and goes up and down one second im all talkin bout dark stuff then i get possitive for like one second and then im talking about death. i dont like it.. i think i was in a transitional period at this time too so i was all undesided of my emotions.. basicly i hate it and it sucks haha im commenting my own work. i think thats funny in its self. ok im done. -
Not too bad. Better than a lot I've read. Should check mine.
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