A hail of a bell,
Became softer and softer,
A farewell to sun,
While all flowers of heaven,
Were bloomed near the deep blue sea.
The moon climbed a tree,
To see the fields waving hands.
And to hear the song,
Of the musical zephyr,
Along with the sea's drum beat.
The stars of the sky,
Wink and wink their eyes with shy,
Seeing the flowers,
Of cliffs bowing their small heads,
Before them with affection.
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Written October 25th, 2006
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Nice Poem
Sweet melody of love.the stars on the sky are really enjoying the melody of your voice, beautiful thought, thanks for sharing
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Your words gave me an impression of walking along the shore at night seeing all of the tulips in bloom in Holland. Feeling the moist breeze off the water. Wonderful imagery. Good write. Thank you. The text has a slow paced meter, like a song in your head. It's interesting, there is no title here??? Makes me curious to know what "Tanka" means.
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great flow of this verse, an upbeat romp along the sea shore under the evening sky you take us there to that place
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This poem was a great relief from all the sad love poems (that I write too lol). Your description paints such a beautiful picture., I very much enjoyed it.
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