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mAn

mAn - tHe mOst cOnFuSed cReAtUrE oF tHe wOrLd,
tHinKinG aNd tHiNkInG uNtIl wOnDeRfUl iDeAs uNfUrL.
bEsT rEpReSeNtEd bY tHiS pElL-mElL fOnT,
bOgGlInG mInD bEyOnD hIs wAnT!

oH! sUdDeNlY sOmEtHiNg sTrIkEs hIs mInD,
hE gEtS hApPy – aT lAsT sOmEtHiNg hE dId fInD.
nExT mOmEnT hE dIsMiSsEs tHe iNsPiRaTiOn,
tHiNkInG- sOmEoNe mIgHt hAvE A rEvErSe oPiNiOn!

nEvEr dOeS hE bElIeVe iN hImSeLf,
aNd gOeS aFtEr dIsHoNeSt pElF.
pErSeVeRaNcE iS fAr fRoM hIs tHoUgHt,
yEt hE wAnTs tHaT hE iS nEvEr cAuGhT!

dO nOt bElIeVe a mAn uNtIl,
yOu kNoW hIm aNd hIs wIlL.
fOr hE wIlL eLsE dEcEiT yOu,
aNd yOu wIlL bE hElPlEsS, tRuE!

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Option 01
Written October 25th, 2006

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  • SmartBrick
    June 6, 2008
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    I liked this very much!I'm glad you took up my offer to write in sticky caps!


    signed confused


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    April 16, 2007
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    LOL cute, I like it =o) Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • eternalpoet
    December 29, 2006

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    3 Stars ***

    (i iNtErpRetEd tHe wOrD "mAn" hERe iN thiS pOEm aS shORt fOR mAn-kINd.)

    stIckY cAPs ARe bAd-bAd... iT cONfUzzLe's peOPle... bUT me nOpE-nOPe bE cONfUsed.

    nIce rhYmiNg, bUt aT cErtAIn inStAncEs iT seEmEd fOrcED. bUt anYwAYs, gOoOoOd wrIte-uP OVer aLl.

    tAke cAreS aNd hAve a nIce time mY dEar fRIend...jUst kEeP iT uP...yOuR hUmblE lItTlE fRIenD... ... ... .. - vIc


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 25, 2006
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    Excellent!

    Wondefully done I love this one. You have written this really well and I like your rhyme as well I liked the way you used the StIcKy CaPs s the basis for a kind of turbulent write.
    Excellent Best to you in the contest
    Gaylene


  • shuvi
    October 25, 2006
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    Fantastic !!!

    great... hahaha... good work... love and cheers, shuvi

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