Touching, tasting, let me
Hold you captive in this spell.
Ultimate pleasures, as your
Needs begin to swell. Heat, rising,
Dancing, caressed- flesh to flesh.
Entwined as one, in passion;
Raptured as we mesh. Clash, collide, a
Storm of our ecstasy. Lightning strikes, a
Tempest of sensuality. Deep moans, as we
Relinquish to the night. Our desires,
Unified as infernal sparks ignite. This storm
Caressed your soul, testing out her luck, allowing me to
Keep you, forever thunderstruck!
Author notes
Yep, used per the song from AC/DC
Written October 24th, 2006
In a list
- Sensual and Erotic • next in list
- Against the Ivory (inspired by music) • next in list
- Acrostics • next in list
What did you think
Comments
1 - 20 of 20
-
Thanks hun, appreciate the comment.
Storm -
Wow great acrostic. I can feel your emotions here girl. Great job
~Ron~
-
Umm, yeah it can be. Thanks for the comment.
Storm -
Love is a very addicting drug the satyr
-
Thank you Keith, you know I always appreciate your words.
Storm -
Thanks Jeffro, appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Oh this Storm has every intention of striking twice, three times, and then some, lol. Thanks for the comments, appreciate it.
Storm -
Beautiful
The Storm Goddess she writes, her heart in all,
She needs not the scholars, or their rules to call,
She writes with such passion, all her essence to see,
Her tears, her fears, and her tragedy,
To relate to her heart, and know of her dreams,
Her honesty shines, as the stars that gleam,
I swim forth within, all her poetries form,
No rules to then see,
Just the heart of the Storm!
-
WOW this is a good piece of work,
packed with the emotions of lovin' between two people.
I thoroughly enjoyed this one...
Well done. Keep writing & I will keep reading..
Jeffro -
That was very beautifully done! Will it strike twice?
I sure would love that! 
-
Thank you Tes. It is a kickin' song and definitely takes a mood up. And you're right, what kind of StormGOddess would I be if I didn't write about the storms? Appreciate the comments.
Hugs
Storm -
Sis...
First I have to say that is my favorite song in the world...It can turn any mood I am in to a great one...
The acrostic...Fantastic hun absolutely wonderful my sweet sis and your name is not StormGoddess for nothing hey!!!!!!!!
Love ya sis
Tes
-
Thank you Sandy, appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you dear, glad you like.
Storm -
I'll keep them coming if you'll keep reading. LOL Thanks for the commesnt sweetie, really appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed.
Storm -
Totally awesome piece, Storm! You go, girl!
-
Kudos
this gave me goosebumps Storm, brilliant! -
Steamy
I do, I do, I loved the way the title was also the lasting impression. It seems so natural for you to write such tasteful, yet erotic poetry. Maybe what I'm trying to say is that the imagery is outstanding and vivid. Please keep them coming! -
Thank you Kari. My stormy metaphors are running rampant, and I am smiling. Appreciate the comments.
Storm -
deep
wow sis what a wonderful acrostic I love it You've done great on it hun. The background is so unique!
Kari
Adding your comment:
1 - 20 of 20
8 old applause
