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One Moment in Time

If for one moment in time, is captured
A random choice on life's road
And if many people had ventured
To see what sort of story it told

Would it speak of deeds of grandeur
Or would it tell of precious love
Would it show things humble, with splendor
Or would it fly with peace, like a dove

Would it comfort all those chosen
To see the epiphanol sight
Would it guide their eyes toward Heaven
To see Jesus, in His holy light

With just one moment in time, chosen
Just one, for the world to see
I wonder what things would be spoken
If they took that moment from me

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Written October 23rd, 2006

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    October 24, 2006
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    Hi John. A lovely write and message. Very good flow and rhyme. Deep expression of emotion. Lovely rhythm. Good word choice. Nice alliteration. Your faith shines through in this piece. Well crafted and a much enjoyed read. Shelley