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It Is Her.

That fearless heart -

     lays open to me.

The laughter-

    spills from the depths of her soul.


It is her smile that warms over me,

   as if she has known me for years.

        I am the pages of a most cherished book;

           she desires only to read more

                            page

                             by

                            page.


Her arms sprinkle around me-

   for they are Serenity’s blanket of trust.

Our friendship pumps through my pen -

   and onto these pages.

{deepening as we grow}


Opposites, by all meaning of the very word,

     yet we have crossed bloodlines many lives before.


It is her: thy full alluring moon of my eyes

     that holds my hand-

          over the pebbles of uncertainty

                              &

         through the mountains of life.


It is her.

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For my beautiful and wonderfully supportive friend Bel. I love you so much Bel!!
Written October 24th, 2006

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  • panegyric ink
    December 5, 2006
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    Wow!!! This one will never grow old!


  • panegyric ink
    December 5, 2006
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    Thanks for reminding me of this super awsome write!!!!!!

    I wrote a letter to my mother a day later and remarked on this poem you'd written. I gave her my login and she found it, called me @ home to tell me she had thought the same, that this is an awsome write!!
    Thanks for sharing!!!
    -fallower.


  • luckynsincere
    October 29, 2006
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    Thanks so much for your words here. THis poem was to my darling friend here on this site. We had to have been twins in another life
    Thanks again for reading and leaving such a wonderful comment!
    Always,
    Melanie


  • Poet of the heart 2
    October 29, 2006
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    Wow, I am glad I picked to read this one. This was just s touching and beyond words. Good luck in the contest.


  • panegyric ink
    October 29, 2006
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    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I had to comeback ...this so beautiful as to be almost surreal in some way, odd, I'm not sure I can even really pinpoint it. These thoughts ... are just so real for me. Honost.


    • luckynsincere
      December 5, 2006
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      Thanks so much for your comments... I somehow have missed them... I guess with all the changes it is just hard to keep up with.

      Thanks.
      Melanie


  • panegyric ink
    October 26, 2006
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    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    So Very creative!!!!!!! This is as romantic as it will ever get!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    October 25, 2006
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    Mel... i could not ask for a more touching and stunning view of my sister. Bel is someone very dear to me even when we don't talk. As her twin spiritsister, I am unable to express the things that I wish to say because inside I am scared of the emotions that I feel for her. I love her in her so many different ways and you have just expressed so many of them. Thank you dearest for entering and giving me a chance to honor her.

    Loves and hugs
    Chryssa


  • tomisb
    October 25, 2006
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    delightful read. strong sharing of love.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 24, 2006
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  • luckynsincere
    October 24, 2006
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    Thanks a million Kari. I always appreciate your warm comments.
    Mel


  • luckynsincere
    October 24, 2006
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    Thanks Bel, I am so glad that you liked it. If that is the case than my mission was successful.
    Love,
    MEl

  • Kari gold member
    October 24, 2006
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    sweet

    awwwww what a precious write for her You've done a much excellent job here hun as always Nice grapic The best of luck to you in the contest

    Kari


  • Celticmoon
    October 24, 2006
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    Oh Mel

    I read this when you posted it and I cried. I have come back to it a few times attempting to comment and cried each time. I cannot even begin to describe how this made me feel, or deeply this has touch the very core of me. The beauty of your heart and soul shine brighter than any star I have ever seen. The amount of love and tenderness you possess is truly amazing. And here I am commenting and still crying yet again.

    Mel you are an absolutely, totally, completely, and wonderfully incredible woman and I love and adore you to no end!


  • luckynsincere
    October 24, 2006
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    Thank you so much for your lovely comment!
    Always,
    Mel


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    October 24, 2006
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    Absolutely a beautiful write. Bel will just love this write. Great job to you and good luck in the contest.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*

  • luckynsincere
    October 24, 2006
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    thanks a million sweety!
    Mel

  • luckynsincere
    October 24, 2006
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    Thanks so much sweety!
    Mel


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 24, 2006
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    What a wonderfully sweet and beautiful write you have penned! I know Bel will love this as it comes from deep within your heart! Awesome piece, sweetie! All the best in this contest!


  • GorgeouslyBroken
    October 24, 2006
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    Wow, great job Melanie. Great words and meaning.
    Love you-
    Always
    Jamie

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