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Where Did I Go Wrong

Stuck in this place for just too long
Sitting here wondering where I went wrong
And why are you gone
And why am I afraid to move on

I got to get out of here
If it’s the last thing I do
Life in this town
Has got me so blue  
And still I only think about you

Falling apart losing myself
Screaming and crying
Just give me some help
Get me away
Far from this place
Into your arms and loving embrace

Wake from the dream
Remember you’re gone
And start to think
where did I go wrong

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Written October 24th, 2006

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