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What fool do you take me for?

What fool do you take me for?
To believe your flowery words,
that has no meaning at all?

What fool do you take me for?
To believe what your eyes tell me,
even though your actions disagree?

To stay with you
though my head tells me no?

What fool do you take me for?
To forgive you
for so  many times you've hurt me so?

What fool do you take me for?
I'm not a fool for you
At least
Not anymore

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Written October 24th, 2006

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  • sexykitten87
    October 24, 2006
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    thanks for the comment. i'm sorry that you've been hurt like that. that's how i feel right now and it just came out.

  • sexykitten87
    October 24, 2006
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    thank you, brit.

  • sexykitten87
    October 24, 2006
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    thank you. i wrote it as my feelings are fresh.


  • LyricistFor TheMute
    October 24, 2006
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    fuck yea this is my anthem right now. ive been hurt in a way im sure noone has ever been hurt like before. this is exactly how i feel. im so glad i scoped this one out. thank you for this one i needed this really bad.i like how you were raw and heartless this is how i feel right about now.


  • XxXAmazed MeXxX
    October 24, 2006
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    PERFECT

    Excellent, i love it. it finishes itself. it is a wonderful write! Perfection!!!!

  • Eusebius
    October 24, 2006
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    Bravo!

    An old lover's lament, very nicely done here! Bravo!!

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