I don't blame you if you hate me,
I understand if you don't ever want to see me again,
I know it was my own mistake, that i must take the blame.
But as the tears stream slowly from my eyes,
i can't help but feel as though, I've made the biggest mistake.
I've lost a friend.
I want you to forgive me,
we don't have to talk again,
just want you to know that I'm sorry.
It hurt me so terribly,
like a knife slicing through my heart,
when i saw you walk away from me.
You had nothing to say.
Even though i tried to explain,
i tried to ease the pain,
i know jealousy has no prize to gain.
Its driving me insane,
i need to be near you,
but there's nothing that i can say to make those thoughts go away.
I must suffer the pain.
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Written October 24th, 2006
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It's a good thing to forgive, so don't ask people not to forgive. We all make mistakes and it's only human, forgiveness helps us to learn. If we are never forgiven, the effort to change isn't worth it, trust me I know. I hope you have forgiven yourself, as you can't except others to forgive you before this happens.
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