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First Blood

Lost in my own mind
These thoughts are my binds
A pressure put on me by you
Leaves me with nothing else to do
You take away and never give back
Can’t focus, mind never on track
You fight against me, why?
Just one answer, ”I want you to die”
All I think is, what have I done
Didn’t we feel love, didn’t we have fun
All this time I thought I could go to you
But I did and my blood you drew

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Written October 24th, 2006

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  • Bohemian Poser
    November 30, 2006
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    beautiful

    Wow, I really like this one.