A cute little angel was born,
After which everything seemed worn out!
She was welcomed with many flowers,
But then we noticed, she had super powers!
She had powers which could make everything alright,
Everyone who fought, settled down because of her!
She knew how to keep everyone happy,
But sometimes she used to be unhappy...
And then, all her needs were fulfilled!
She's a darling and now it's time for her to be a bride!
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This is for you! 
Love you alot babes.. and will miss you like hell! 
Written October 24th, 2006
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this is so cute but not exactly what i'm loking for but stilll a nice write.
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sweet, but can be wayy better
Awww shucks I miss her too
Wasn't the wedding just awesome 
Moving on to your poem.. you need to build a vocabulary.. the content is fine but you should make up your mind if you want to write free verse or rhyme.. both mixed up is just bizarre
hope you find that useful
Take care babes muahhhh
Zain
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fantastick .... its kinda cute i loved it well done ~aunty cheeky
xoxoxoxo
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great!!
this is a very emotional heart filling write. reading this made my day 
keep up the awesome work! <3 *Jordan**
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so sweet
Thank you Daughter for this most moving and wonderful tribute to your sister. I loved this entry. I am sure she just adores it as well and how could she not having you as her sister. You are a true treasure. Thank you for gracing us with your talent.
Well done and be blessed daughter.
Daddy -
How wonderful a sister you are. What a beautiful poem about her and her life as an angel. How wonderful it is to have angels in your life and know it. You did a great job writing this for her.
Hope she enjoys it as much as we have!
Love,
mom -
aray itna sabh kuch bata dya kuch secret hi rakh laiti
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Great
What a splendid write for your sister!!! Very well done!
I know that your sister will cherish your poem forever. What a lovely gift you've penned with your talented pen.
My Goodness...I am very impressed! Great job.
Blessings! Tammy -
I LOVEE you too!
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What a beautiful poem you have written
It's so lovely to think there are angels around that will keep everything right for us. You are such a clever girl and I love you
Your Gramma Gaylene
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Thank You sooo much!
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Beautiful
I don't know about GUGU! But your beautiful words make me go GA GA! Well done lil bird of love well done! -
Wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!
WOWIE! GR8IE! AMAZING! FANTASTIC! EXCELLENT! & BRILLIANT! Well, I don't have more words for this umm, what should I say? IMPRESSING write! I LOVEEEEE IT and I guess this one is the best! You should make Gugu apa read it! I know she'll LOVEEEEEE IT!!!! I never knew you are soooo talented! Love you lots sister and Best of Luck in the contest! I know you will win!
Lots and Lots and Lots of Love,
*Nida*
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