Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Soulful insight

Gather around the ground

on distance shore lines

from coast to coast

dwell the depth of

my bring.

in many lifetimes i

have loved and lost

laugh and cried before I died

in many bodies I

travel but of one

soul.Who but i knows

my truth,but those of the

one now laying cold.

King maybe once or a Queen

on the hunt the master i could have been

but better at sewing seams.

I am..my enemy my protector,

my friend and lover

twice my wife

once my mother,my brother but never

my sister.My father i was .


In a far away place with a different face

at another time i was able

to rewind and fast forward time

travel to the depths of my mind

only to find the hole

where once rest  memories

untold.

so who am I that fear

  not thee uncertainties

but  dream thee impossible,

believe thee unthinkable,

and see thee unseen.

Yes, who but I my Soulful insight.


Author notes

the journey to finding self most begin with self who knows the many secert doors to one soul but you
Written October 24th, 2006

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 15 of 15

  • Angel-of-Pain
    November 1

    Edit | Reply
    very nice poem, but i found that the bright colours made the poem too difficult to read and took away from tyhe poem.


  • secberm
    October 22
    Edit | Reply
    Well done, sis. Write on.

    Dez


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 10

    Edit | Reply
    I feel the ease upon the pen to ponder deep in thought .. you are a blessing I can see for the writing is on the wall many hugs and well said hun always Angel♥


  • AsIThink gold member
    October 3

    Edit | Reply
    This puts me in the mind of a quiet journey in densely-packed forests filled with fog in some places; a lake and streams in others. Very reflective write that skillfully used good imagery and dreamy concept stuff. Nice job here.

    AsIThink...


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 2

    Edit | Reply

    DEEP

    very thought provoking indeed..liked how this flowed and themessage too..yeah, you the real deal lady..


  • Dalawa
    September 6, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Wow! this is really abstract, but I loved it. Beautiful imagery, and ending with the two words 'soulful insight' bring the poem into a nice circle (aka great ending!) Excellent!


  • Writing Heart
    September 1, 2007

    Edit | Reply

    Great Piece

    You are a great writer...I enjoy your depth of detail! I can envision a soul traveling...like a boat. Great piece.


  • Marctheman
    August 21, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    i like basesicly everything i read from you, i can not say it enough you are a true talent.


  • opaqueangel
    July 27, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    wow this is a great peice, it is hard for me to decide what I liked best because I liked it all so much. Great write and good luck in the contest.


  • keeyley
    November 4, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    you have once again blown me away with this beautiful piece


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    November 1, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    BRILLIANT PIECE OF WRITING

    I took this to be a work about reincarnation. I loved it. You delve deep within yourself to find memories of lifetimes past. Who are you really?

    Who are you really scared off? Which personality? You ask deep and meaningful questions in this piece. You are looking deep within your soul. A fantastic poem.


  • October 26, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    FANTASTIC!!!!

    To look upon your soul is breathtaking! This is a very deep poem. Thank you for sharing it with me. Sorry I have been very busy of late.


  • lovelifelive gold member
    October 25, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    thanks for your comment and do look forward to hearing from you
    Cori


  • YoungCutta29
    October 25, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    10/10

    Nice work it is very well put. you will be hearing from me in the end of this contest.


  • WarrioroftheHeart gold member
    October 24, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    I like the poem, a good flow.
    well done

    Adrian

1 - 15 of 15