Time lost in day dreaming,
Synapses tangled up in lustful wishes ... and memories -
Pictures of sandy skin and sweaty palms .. bruises;
Time lost in hopeful thinking,
Minutes squandered at temptations feet
With demon's eyes parting lips into a quiver...
Time lost longing
For love to be delivered by lust's violent wooing...
Time lost as i sit simply waiting.
Author notes
personally i think it sucks. but i havent posted anything in a while and i was just here .. so .
Written October 24th, 2006
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sounds like a vacation gone bad, or a love that was only a fleeting, momentary fling resulting in pain and uncertainty. The waiting part is the toughest thin in your poem, the heart needs to know….hope deferred makes the heart sick, may you find the hope, the love you need and so richly deserve. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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