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is love really love?

is love really love
or is it lust in denial
do I what It?
can I feel it?
I can breathe
I love the violence
Its like a drug
never seeming to think
always failing
never loved
never missed.

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Written October 23rd, 2006

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  • Princesskitty30
    October 23, 2006
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    Short and sweet


  • Fallen Angel 2
    October 23, 2006
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    interesting... i like it... new point of view on love and lust... refreshening... good job.