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My Name......

My name is Shamail Fatima Sultanpuri!

I love it and not hate it!

It means light! and Fatima was the daughter of our dear Prophet.

I love my name and it makes me feel proud.

My friend tells me sometimes my name sounds funny,
But whatever she says I do not care because,
I love my name!

I am a little fat, so some children tease me,

FAT-IMA.. but I don't care for whatever they say, because I LOVE my name!

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Written October 23rd, 2006

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  • The Poetic Angel
    January 16, 2007

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    awwwwwww me lil berry you have such a butiful name Shamail it sounds so pretty ..im so glad you dont take notice or the children that tease you.. you sure do got a name to be proud of Fatima is also the name of the athlete who was famouse for her javeline throwin ...smile Aunty cheeky x0x0x00x


  • slipperssun gold member
    January 2, 2007
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    i think that is awesome tht you love your name. it is an unusual one but coming from Australia i have not heard it before. the fact that it means light makes it all the more special because where ithere is light there are angels nearby


    • MaaiL
      January 2, 2007
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      Thanks alot for ur wonderful comment dear!


  • October 24, 2006
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    FANTASTIC!!!!!!!

    OMG!!!! I love this GREAT PIECE OF WORK done by my BIG SISTA, SHAMAIL! I don't know why, but I'm just in LOVE with it! I can't copy and paste the whole poem! Because all the lines are just FANTASTIC!! I loveee your name too!

    Lots and Lots and Lots and Lots and Lots of Love,
    *Nida*


  • Keith Drew gold member
    October 24, 2006
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    Beautiful

    You are the starlight in the sky of so many peoples lives little bird of love. And all those chocolates and strawberries and cream, may make you a little cherubic.
    But all angels love chocolate and sweet things.
    And everyone loves an angel!
    As I love your beautiful name.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 24, 2006
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    How wonderful! You should be very pround of your name it is very pretty and unique. Just like you! When I was young people liked to tease me about my name too. I just let it go, sometime they are just jealous, because theirs is not as nice.
    Best wishes to you in the contest.
    I love you,
    mom


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 23, 2006
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    You keep being proud of your name because it is such a beautiful one for a wonderful grandaughter. It's sad and hard when people tease you about your name, but I am very proud of you for not letting it trouble you
    I love you
    Gaylene~ ~


  • Glenda L Hand
    October 23, 2006
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    I am glad for you that you love your name and that you have pride in it., What does Shamial mean? Thank you for your entry. I will not disqualify it, just call it free verse. GLenda

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