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Caressed by a Storm

The calling of the storm
Reflecting in your eyes
For slowly, she transforms
Erotic in disguise

A gentle touch to flesh
A tender kiss to lips
Two bodies start to mesh
Grinding hip to hip

Tongue begins to lick
Slowly tracing lower
Against your chest, a flick
Moving ever slower

A nipple 'tween my teeth
As I gently start to bite
The jewels underneath,
You know, are mine tonight

Continue on this quest
Now I'm heading south
Your crown softly pressed
Engulfed within my mouth

Soft tickles as you quiver
Moist heat with each stroke
Dance my love, and shiver
Whilst this flow, I provoke

Intrigued by your desire
Intoxicated by your scent
Tame my raging fire
Flood me with your torrent

Let me taste your pleasure
Indulge each lustful sin
The storm will stay forever
Feel my love upon the wind

Author notes

Enjoy sweetheart.
Written October 23rd, 2006

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  • Colin OBrien
    December 19, 2006
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    WOW

    Simply outstanding

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 25, 2006
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    Thank your for your comments, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • TheSimplestImbecile
    October 25, 2006
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    Great!

    Awesome! Excellent word choice, very... image provoking...
  • Trackrules
    October 24, 2006
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    Damn Baby!! Talk about getting turned on! Awesome write baby

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 24, 2006
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    Thank you Brian, much appreciate the comments.

    Storm

  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    October 24, 2006
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    Awesome

    Awesome loved this one its been a while since I have seen a really tasteful erotic write such as this one. The passions of love flow throught this fantastic write. wishing you all the best Brian
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