rememb'ring you today
recalled your energy
bumped it many times
your fingers touched my face
invisibly forcing
a smile to appear
having you here with me
buffers eternity
wherever you are
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Stole the format from Dalaney34
Written October 23rd, 2006
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I can picture fingers shoving your lips up on the sides, though invisible...oops one slipped and went up your nose!!! Oh no!
tee hee hee!
dk -
well, obviously..you didnt write it about my second boyfriend..
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Purely All
Ah such a tactile poem ... and tender.
Words which moved me, were:
your energy ... touched ... eternity ...
wherever you are ... a smile appeared ... many times ...
having you here with me ... remem'bring ... my face ...
your fingers ... recall ... me ...
See?
I read you.
Love
Always Myra -
I honestly did not write this about your second boyfriend, but glad you could identify. Sure I will read your writes.
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Yes, Goddess, I cannot explain it any better if I used a thousand words. It just is what it is. There are no superlatives worthy.
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This is a good write. Short, sweet, and full of emotion. This reminds me of my second bofriend and when he was away at work how i would get butterflies in my stomache just thinking of him and not being able to wait a single moment to see him again. Great write. Keep it up! Check out some of my writes?
-karen -
Brilliant
I loved this, the style aswell...
'having you here with me
buffers eternity
wherever you are'
That is a wonderful feelig to be able to experience that kind of energy between you and another human being...
I LOVED IT...
Elm
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