I have become this monster
This awful monster has consumed me
Became a big part of who I am
A big part of what I didn't want to be
It has consumed my every emotion
Leaving me sad and completely alone
Nothing seems right to me n e more
No longer is the light, to me shown
It's all faded away with my emotions
Gone somewheres I've long forgotten
It use to be a big part of me
But now its all been forgotten
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Written October 23rd, 2006
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I have felt like this many times in my life , I felt so alone like no one cared , But then someone took my hand and showed me they cared , let me take your hand and show you people do care
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man that hits home. i have felt like that many times. great poem
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I always seem to be making the same kinds of mistakes though, why else would I always be so sad? Why else would I always be so hurt? Why else would I always want it to all end and go away? I jess I donno n e more. (sigh) I wish someone could make it all better.
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your no monster,every body makes mistakes its about not making the same one more than twice,your not alone,you got friends
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Wow...that was deep! I know how you feel, I was able to find myself again but still...dang. That was a hit at where I once was, great job!
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