Baby, it's you.
You are the one
That makes me smile.
You make me happy.
You make me feel
Like I'm the only person
In your life.
But sadly,
You're also the one,
That makes me cry.
Author notes
yeah basicly bla idk.... seems some what generic to me...
Written October 22nd, 2006
A contest entry
- unpaid members, no trophies (contest) Please click only if you qualify! by blind ecye dog.
300 points, ended October 28, 2006, 45 entries
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This happens all too often.
I like that your poem was short and to the point. RED -
Wow, powerful, yet so short, great job
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I relate to this way to hard. It actually made me cry while i was reading it because thats how true it sounds thats me to a tee. You done a really good job on this piece of work. Good Luck in the Contest
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