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goodbye..

As a tear rolls down my face I look out the window with only one thought in mind

Goodbye love
All the joy I once had…

Goodbye love
That feeling of being wanted

Goodbye love
The thought of a future.

Goodbye love
The warmth of lying close to some one

Goodbye love
The first kiss

Goodbye love
……..
…….
…

Hello…
Loneliness…

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Written October 22nd, 2006

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  • purple wings
    October 22, 2006
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    much love fellow phoenix.i feel you.


  • forgotten voice
    October 22, 2006
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    awe thats so sad but so good. i loved it keep up the great writes!


  • unperfectlyperfect
    October 22, 2006
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    wow... this is a powerful poem but i think we all know how this feels... but sometimes the end is a new beginning