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To Cookie Zeal

I like cookies of every kind


Those with chocolate chips, nuts and fruit


I like oatmeal raisin, shortcake too


Girl Scout Cookies are good too


But my favorite Cookie


Is name Cookie Zeal


Angels shed a tear


When she was sent here


A poet of the extraordinary kind


She shares her words and her rhyme


When love words are spoken


You can bet she is near


For Cookie knows love


She share's it with us


Both the bad and the good of it


Just read Cookie Zeal


Author notes

Happy Birthday Cookie, Off to read some of your poetry, It's been a long while, Shame on me
Written October 22nd, 2006

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  • raspberry Greeters member
    November 8, 2006
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    Such a sweet little precious write So full of love and good wishes. Thank you dear, thanks a ton for this splendid entry here.


  • GuardianPhoenix7289
    October 24, 2006
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    Ahh! Excellent job! And funny somewhat at the beginning to! I can see Cookie Zeal already saw this! XD Well... I hope raspberry doesn't die because of it! But yes, great job! Perhaps check out my birthday wish to her?


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    October 22, 2006
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    gulp.............
    I did NOT expect to get a dedication poem from you and I'm....befuddled. Stuttering to say the least. Do you KNOW how special it makes me feel? I sense such joy, and yet.........I'm more humbled by the message that you reflect of my writing, and how you believe it represents me as a person. It springs a leak of tears from me that weren't there before. The Lord must be using you, as that's how our emotions get touched in unique ways as this.

    God love and bless you in abundance, for firstly who You ARE.....and for what you give to others.

    I LOVE It..............!!!!!!!!!! Thank you gobs, brother!


  • blueyez
    October 22, 2006
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    What a sweet little tribute!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 22, 2006
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    Very cute little ditty indeed! Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day and be safe. Jeannie


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 22, 2006
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    Sweeeeeet

    AmericanInIraq - you are so smooth and sweeeeeet - I'm sure your poem here is sweeeeeet enough to eat, and to win the contest prize! Good luck, I hope to see you at the birthday party!!

  • June-bug
    October 22, 2006
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    excellent

    Very cute and upbeat write. You sure peaked my interest to read some of her work. Wonderful!

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