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beautifully chaotic

Beautifull chaotic she seems to be,
hair in a mess for them to see.
Judgement on clothes, music and such,
caring at all or just to much.
Bloody wrists, half hearted soul,
Feeling empty, or just not whole.
Black painted lips, eyes of grey.
Mourning the fact, its another day.
Stockings worn,torn and tight,
Brain and heart, begin to fight.
Arms crossed,close to her heart,
Holding her life, right at the start.
A knife in her hand, tears down her cheek,
Answers and smiles, daily she'll seek.
Under her nose, behind the book,
A different person,with a new look.
Pretending to be, all that she's known,
Hiding whats real, whats never shown.
The person inside, thats dark and deep,
inside her self she's there to keep.
Broken heart, sewn by two,
A different person, they never knew.
A person who's morbid, squeemish and weak,
Crying sometimes, for being a freak.
Different from them, makes her stand out,
Hiding in shame, full of self doubt.
Morbid thoughts feeding her mind,
Yet still this ones, one of a kind.
Beautifully chaotic, deaths little child,
Sweetly innocent, crazily wild.
Black rose pinned to her chest,
Waking up, put to the test.
A drop of blood, in each hand,
To much pain for you to understand.
Haunted by memories, kept in the past,
Sinking to deeply, dying to fast.
Each day she grows old and slips away,
Knowing the last, might be today.
Beautifully chaotic, deep in her head,
Black thoughts, sad moments, almost dead.

Author notes

I wrote this..well..today.. I was thinking of how I've been judged my whole life as everything, a loser, a bitch, a no body, a punk, and now a nerd/book worm...I dont mind now. Cuz now I pity them. But as I look back and see who I was this is the person that was screaming out.
Written October 22nd, 2006

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  • Lonely Christina
    November 11, 2008
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    all i can say...is...AMAZING FUCKIN AMAZING lol


  • TwiztidMaggot
    June 25, 2007

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    wow...

    I know how it feels to be judged! (My own dad thinks he knows me... he is only judging me... hmm....) I've been labled the same things you have... lol. but yeah, you did a good job! I really like it. keep up your good work!

    Crimson


  • simpleplan13
    October 22, 2006
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    I really like this... the switching from you are to who you were is wonderful... the descriptions are pwoerful and beautiful.. awesome job... one question though.... why is it a column and not a poem?