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FrEeDuMb

tHiS iS wOnDeRfUl
LeT's BrEaK tHe RuLeS!

wHo WaNtS tO cOnFoRm?
WhO wAnTs To LeAd?

ThIs IsN't NoRmAl
AnD nEiThEr ArE wE!

tHiS iS tHe MoMeNt
ThIs Is ThE tRuTh
tUrN oFf YoUr T.v.
Do YoU
kNoW hOw To Be YoU?

oR

dO yOu TrY tO bE tHeM?

lIaRs PrEtEnD.

aLl ThAt'S rEaL aRe QuEsTiOnS
AnSwErS aRe FaKe.

ThE qUeSt GoEs On
As OuR pErCePtIoN oF rEaLiTy
KeEpS uS aWaKe.

As We ChAsE oUr DrEaMs
Of BiGgEr AnD bEtTeR tHiNgS
wE fOrGeT wHaT iT mEaNs
To HaVe CoNtRoL oF oUr BrAiNs.

So I mUsT aSk YoU tHiS.

hOw Do YoU fEeL?

dO yOu UnDeRsTaNd WhAt LiFe Is?

Do YoU kNoW wHaT's ReAl?

Author notes

iT mIgHt Be RhEtOrIcAl
BuT wHaT dO yOu ThInK?

Written October 21st, 2006

A contest entry

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Comments


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    March 3
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    Very interesting, I like it. Though it was hard to read, it was good(:


  • samuisamu
    October 25, 2006
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    So True

    What a difficult question you pose. But its interesting that you say that questions are real and answers are fake. I dont think I could agree with you more. A question will always be the same.. whereas answers, at least right ones, will always rely on society's perception.