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tears

the tears the run free
down her face
hopeing that someone will catch them

but there is no one there to catch
there never is
no matter how hard she tried

she never has any friends to stay and help
they get mad or upset before they know what is going on
there is no escape she has no real friends

they all leave
they never come back
she gives up

there is no other way
she is tired of being hurt
it is so hard

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i dont know i just kinda put it out there it is how im feeling.....it hurts...
Written October 21st, 2006

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 26, 2006
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    Wonderful writing

    A very deep piece of writing here. You are writing from your heart. Life will get better. I am going through a bad time myself right now - but I know that life will get better. Life is a lesson we all have to learn in. And the earth is just like one big school. Peace be with you.


  • christy22
    October 22, 2006
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    i know i have friends here....on AP.....but they like so many....well they get busy with life and they forget about me....there are so many here i used to be close with and now they dont even know me from eve.....itis hard to go without you guys....i love my friends no matter what they do......i guess i am just missing them and it is not like i have any friends here with me.....i dont know.....itis just hard.....

  • Gleto Orica
    October 22, 2006
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    GetItOutFindASmile!!!:)

    no matter how much it feels like that sometimes-
    you're still not alone my friend...
    but the feeling does hurt,
    & tears are warranted...
    let the run,
    but stay strong-
    cause you're better than thinking you're alone with nothing...
    you still have friends...
    take care Christy...
    God Bless...
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    RolliPollies & Me! The
    ~Glet rica/C. L. Brandon K./Phresh>-|O~
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